This is your Topic 10 Vocabulary list for the Song Project: AiJ Topic 10-4 and the last two counters from 10-3 (the ones on the right-side).
Your group members are: Tamashiro, Ikehara, Sagisi, Whaley, Kitano
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ReplyDeleteHi, this is not a song. You needed to do a song. I have some suggestions. Please fix your video.
ReplyDelete1. Please turn it into a song. If it's a rap, it needs to sound like a rap.
2. You need to take away the red computer program generated correction marks.
3. モアナルアこうこう は (not de)
4. では (not the sound wa)
5. モアナルアこうこう は (needs to be marked as the topic)
6. おんがく の たてもの (music describes building)
7. Check spelling of Moanalua in line 5. Be sure to proofread!
8. キャンパス が (need to mark it as the object)
9. last line needs a は to mark the topic and すずしい (needs the final い)
10. If you are just going to read, you need to read the correct sounds and words.
This is not going to help those who use your video with all the mistakes. Please make the corrections and reload onto the Wiki by Thursday, Oct. 24 at 8:00 pm. on Instructions
You will need to upload your video again. I think it might be in the file folder, but I cannot find your title. I needed to delete the comments. Please add it to the correct position on the page.
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